Fernanda Alatorre
April 13, 2022

Otter.ai vol. II

Reread old version - unedited

Once upon a time, there was a turtle who was going to race a rabbit. And they were both at the starting line and the rabbit was a bit laughing about how the fact that the turtle was going to race against him because the rabbit thought that the turtle was gonna go so slow, and it was going to be such an easy race, because a turtle usually walks really slow. Then the race starts and the rabbit goes rushing at it and running really quickly, and going past the turtle for miles and miles. And then the rabbit realizes that why bother doing such a big effort to finish the race so quickly? That Charlie's gonna go so slow? So the rabbit decides to take a nap. And because he's thought like, Oh, why even take so quickly much time so I might as well just take a nap for a while. And then the rabbit took a nap. So then the rabbit fell asleep for so long. Then when the rabbit suddenly woke up, he realized that so much time had passed and quickly try to keep up the pace and go running towards the race really, really quickly. But when he got to the finish line, he saw that the journal was already there. So the rabbit was really confident about winning but then because being overconfident made him go to sleep and fall asleep, and he lost the race.

Second Version

Once upon a time, there was a turtle who was going to race a rabbit. They were both at the starting line. The rabbit was laughing about the fact that the turtle was going to race against him because the rabbit thought that the turtle was gonna be so slow, and it was going to be such an easy race, because turtles are usually really slow. Then the race starts and the rabbit goes running really quickly, going past the turtle, and going far for miles and miles. And then the rabbit realizes that why bother doing such a big effort to finish the race so quickly? So the rabbit decides to take a nap. He's thought, Oh, why even take so much effort to finish it, might as well just take a nap for a while. And then the rabbit took a nap. So then the rabbit fell asleep, but it was too long. The rabbit suddenly woke up, and realized that so much time had passed. The rabbit quickly stood up and tried running towards the finishing line. But when he got to the finish line, he saw that the turtle was already there. The rabbit was so overconfident about winning that it made him fall asleep, and he lost the race.

Third Version

Once upon a time, there was a turtle who was going to race against a rabbit. They were both at the starting line, and the rabbit was really laughing about the fact that the turtle was going to go and race against him because the rabbit knew the turtle was going to be very slow. So the rabbit thought it was gonna be a really easy race. Then the race starts, and the rabbit goes running really quickly, going past the turtle, and going even for miles and miles. But then the rabbit realized that why bother doing such a big effort to finish the race? That he could just take a nap and rest for a while, so the rabbit decided to take a nap. And then the rabbit fell asleep, but he fell asleep for far too long... The rabbit suddenly woke up and realized that so much time had passed. So the rabbit quickly stood up trying to run towards the finish line to try to finish in time, but when he got to the finish line, he realized that the turtle was already there. The rabbit was very overconfident about winning that it made him fall asleep and eventually lost the race.

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